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March & April 2008

April (& March) 2008 

 

Writer's Quote of the Month

 

If you can’t explain your plot to me in 30 seconds, I don’t want to read your novel.
~ Amanda Patterson, who hopes that someone is listening to her.

 

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 Contents

 

1.   News 

2.   Guest Speaker: Johan Marais, Owner of Fascination Books & Best-selling Author

3.   Courses & workshops

4.   How to Become a Subscriber

5.   Book Reviews

6.   Author Interview: Robert Calderisi 

7.   The Star Struck Writer - Aries

8.   The Write Co Competitions

9.   Classified

10. Students Writing

11. Contacts

 

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1. News

 

O is not just a letter of the alphabet.

Look out for detailed feedback of our week with the Oprah magazine dream winner and the Oprah dream team in The Write Co May Newsletter.

The winner, and The Write Co, will be featured in the May issue of the magazine.

 

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The Caption Competition

 

Write a caption for the photograph of the month! 

 

    

 

Winners - February & enter for March & April

 

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Would you like some feedback on our course, REEL Drama?

See what Rick Thinks

 

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The Write Foundation is almost ready to launch The Power of Words Campaign.

Please email us if you feel that you can help in any way.

 

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The Write Co boardrooms are available for hire when not in use.

R150, 00 per hour

R200, 00 per hour

R250, 00 per hour

Please contact Wiida - wiida@thewriteco.co.za for more information on rates.

 

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Cape Town Calling for Submissions

 

Sarah Bullen (Write Co Director, Cape Town) is writing her follow-up book to Hey Baby! called Can Your Relationship Survive Your Kids?

 

Again she would like to ask The Write Co graduates for some first person submissions.

Topic: And I thought love was enough..... OR Kids changed my relationship forever
Length: 500 words (one page)
Tone: First person confessional. This is your story, not a fictional one. Please give solid advice or real stories. It may be humourous or played straight, depending on your tone. Focus on one particular incident, moment or memory, rather than cover the topic broadly.
Submit: sarah@thewriteco.co.za
Deadline: 5 April

Please indicate if you would like your name changed if your submission is included in the book.

Please note all submissions are treated confidentially.
Please also answer / complete the below sentences with your story:

 

The thing that changed most when we had kids was....
The best advice I ever got about making a marriage work is that ...
Teenagers .......

 

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2. Guest Speaker April 2008!

 

Johan Marais: Author, entrepreneur, world renowned herpetologist, bookseller. 
 
Johan is the best-selling author of 6 non-fiction books and the owner of 32 Fascination Book Stores.
Find out how a boy from Benoni became a best-selling author and a buyer of book stores.
 
"He's the only bookseller I know who actualy makes money selling books," says Amanda Patterson, CEO, The Write Co. "He also used to take me to school when I was a little girl. He worked for my dad."
 
Date: 23 April 2008
Time: 18:00 for 18:30
Venue: TBA

 

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3. Coming up in Writing

 

Creative Writing Courses & Workshops - Call Wiida 079 875-3719 for queries

 

Writers Write (4 weeks):

 

Saturday Mornings: 08.30 – 12.30 12 April 2008

Tuesday & Thursday Mornings: 09:00 – 11:00 15 April 2008

Tuesday & Thursday Evenings: 17:30 – 20:00  15 April 2008

 

Writers Write 2 (4 weeks)

 

Tuesday & Thursday Evenings: 17:30 – 20:00  15 April 2008

 

Write non-fiction (4 weeks)

 

Saturday Mornings: 08.30 – 12.30 19 April 2008

 

Skrywers Skryf (4 weeks)

 

Tuesday & Thursday Evenings: 17:30 – 20:00 mail wiida@thewriteco.co.za

 

Creative Writing One-day Workshops

 

How to write for Mills & Boon: Romancing the Dollar on Saturday 5th April 2008

Plot LUCK: Learn how to plot a novel on Saturday 19th April 2008

How to write lyrics: Music & Lyrics on Saturday 26th April 2008

 

Business Writing One-day Courses 

 

Maverick PR Plan on Tuesday 8th April 2008

Strategic Press Release on Thursday 10th April 2008

Editing Edge on Wednesday 16th April 2008

Send & Receive on Wednesday 23rd April 2008

 

Two Hour Sessions – It’s worth subscribing!

 

Tuesday evenings with Morne Malan

8th April

22nd April 

 

Friday mornings with Anthony Ehlers

4 April

11 April

18 April

 

Friday poetry morning with Amanda Patterson

25 April 

 

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4. How to Become a Subscriber

 

Please click here: subscription form

 

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5. Reviews

 

Our reviewers rate books from 1 – 5

 

1 - For use as a doorstop only

2 - Keep for publishers' & booksellers' strikes

3 - A great holiday read

4 - You'll remember this with enthusiasm a month later

5 – Unforgettable

 

Dexter in the Dark by Jeff Lindsay (Orion)

 

Everyone loves Dexter on television. Most people don’t know that Dexter came to life in Lindsay’s three best-selling novels. The author somehow manages to create a likeable psychopath. Dexter only slices and dices baddies, thanks to his cop father, Harry, who adopted him.
Fans will know all about Dexter’s Dark Passenger. In this novel, the passenger has gone AWOL. Dexter has to cope with a little bit of the normal things humans do every day.
Dexter is set to marry, Rita, and her two delightful children, Cody and Astor. That is if you like mini-psychopaths who want to learn the tools of the trade from you.
Great characterisation, tight plotting, well paced and oddly refreshing.
Highly recommended.

 

Amanda Patterson
4.5/5

 

The Quiet Girl by Peter HØEG (Random House) R212 ISBN:978-1-846-55060-7

 

“The Quiet Girl” is the latest novel by the writer of “Miss Smilla’s Feeling for Snow”. It is set in Copenhagen, Denmark. The lead character, Kaspar Krone, is a clown of international repute, a complex individual with a remarkable ear for sound, a love of Sebastian Bach and an unstoppable desire to fathom the curious circumstances in which he finds himself. He is wanted by the authorities for tax evasion, called to help a remarkable and gifted girl and is facing up to his past. Kaspar’s search for the missing girl brings him into contact with a subversive group of nuns, a megalomaniac businessman, government officials and bizarre plans regarding earthquakes. The reader must tread patiently through the tangled story-web and experience its auditory allusions (being a musical aficionado will help). A compelling, at times obscure read, that veers between a philosophical search and a tense thriller.

 

Helen Schlebusch
3/5

 

A Fold In The Map by Isobel Dixon (Jacana Media) ISBN 978 1 77009 528 1

 

In this poetry collection Isobel Dixon charts two parallel human journeys. The first is the wrenching dislocation of separation from one’s homeland. Still an elected choice. The second, the searing grief of the irrevocable loss at the end of her father’s final painful journey. This depicts inevitability.
“At last, a rest for him
For me, the hollow pit of grief
A body’s emptying.”
Isobel Dixon, raised in the Karoo, now living in Cambridge England, explores both these experiences with a haunting lyricism.
In the first part of the collection – Plenty – the poems deal with family, childhood memories, a longing for home sketched in vivid sense impression of a scorching, water-scarce Africa. Touches of irony and humour relieve emotional intensity.
This childhood idyll forms the backdrop for the story of her father’s death. Depicted in the language of gut-wrenching grief, these poems leave the reader in no doubt of the pivotal role of her father in her life. They close with a hint of healing, reconciling the loss of both life and land.
“After the amputation, bruising weariness
this stony nest, his paradise
My mother’s newfound flowers.”

 

Sandy Goulding
4.5/5

 

Book of the Dead by Patricia Cornwall (Little, Brown) 978031672425-8

 

Rome is a popular backdrop for seasoned crime writers. Cornwall takes us straight there in Book of the Dead. The body of a rising tennis star is dumped near Piazza Novona. Sadistically mutilated, clues are in short supply.
The local Carabinieri call in ace forensic expert, Dr Kay Scarpetta. She’s just moved to South Carolina and opened her own pathology practice. Niece Lucy and long-time sidekick Pete Marino, her partners in crime. Before she’s had time to unpack, more mysterious deaths follow.  The Sandman surfaces as the prime suspect but he’s opening up to Scarpetta’s arch enemy and TV shrink, Dr Marilyn Self. Scarpetta isn’t immune to danger; someone is aiming to write her name in the book!   
I was a fan from the first but the edge has gone. Suspense mixes uneasily with strained relationships and egos. Great on the forensics but the plot has lost its way.

 

Jackie Kelly
3/5

 

Not in the Flesh by Ruth Rendell (Arrow) R199, 00 ISBN: 9780091920609

 

I have read every Ruth Rendell and Barbara Vine (her darker alias) novel. I may be prejudiced.
I enjoy her Wexford novels. Not in the Flesh is one of the best for a long time. Some of Ms Vine's dark thoughts have crept into this book and it works well. It gives one of my favourite old school detectives the edge he needs to fight another few books.
Rendell excels in uncovering our darkest fears and she is the mistress of turning the mundane into the monstrous. A Sight for Sore Eyes still haunts me. I feel almost relieved that I am reading about the extraordinarily ordinary Wexford again. I know that when I pick up a Wexford novel that I will enjoy a police procedural crime thriller in expert hands.
A man walking his dog finds a severed human hand. Which body does it belong to? Wexford leads the hunt for the answer in fine form. This may be formulaic crime writing but I have never felt cheated by Rendell. Every one of her novels can stand alone. She is a professional, talented force to be reckoned with.

 

Amanda Patterson
4/5

 

High Jinx by Sara Lawrence (Faber & Faber) ISBN: 978 0 571 23670 1

 

Jinx Slater and Liberty Latiffe are best friends, attending a boarding school in England. Typical high school teens, they’re always getting up to mischief and facing peer pressure. Everything is going the way it should -until the new girl shows up.
Stella Fox is determined to leave her mark. Jinx and Liberty are asked to look after her, but soon Stella and Liberty form their own little clique. Jinx senses that something about Stella is not right and decides to follow her instincts.
I recommend this book to more mature teens, due to the explicit content. High Jinx is a realistic and funny book. I enjoyed every second of it – and the girls’ adventures ended too soon. I hope there’s a follow up!
 
Emma Boonzaaier (15 years old)
Rating: 3/5
 
The Race by Richard North Patterson (Macmillan) R149, 00   
 
Corey Grace is a handsome, magnetic Republican senator. An act of terrorism forces him into a bitter presidential race. His rivals include a charismatic Christian leader. Corey, a former pilot who was tortured in the Middle East, votes with integrity. His affair with Lexie Hart, an African-American Hollywood actress makes him a loose cannon.
Haunted by a tragic mistake, he lays his soul on the line in the battle for the presidency.
The Race explores America’s favourite election fare. Racism, terrorism, religion, abortion and the rise of a sinister media. Patterson does not take the easy route. He asks the what if questions. This is a rollercoaster ride of betrayal, ruthless choices, and powerful secrets..
Patterson is the best political thriller writer that the USA has produced. 14 novels later, he does not disappoint.

 

Amanda Patterson
3.5/5   

 

The Silver Swan by Benjamin Black (Picador) ISBN 978-0-230-70194-2

 

This mystery novel, the 2nd Benjamin Black (pseudonym used by John Banville) has written in this series, is an attention-grabber.  It’s set in Dublin in the mid 1950’s, in a vaguely sordid, and creepy atmosphere. If it were a movie it would be best in black-and-white.
Quirke, a pathologist, is the fascinating lead character.  Troubled, alluring, with personal issues, and somewhere deep down, a soft heart, decides to dig deeper into the death of Billy Hunt’s wife.  It looks like a suicide, but Billy asks Quirke not to perform the autopsy.  The request is irregular, and Quirke senses trouble.  Despite his better judgement Quirke sets off on an investigation that leads him into a world of drug addiction, sexual obsession, blackmail and murder.
The novel is written beautifully.  I read somewhere that Mr Black writes these books very quickly.  If his writing is this good when he’s not really trying, the result when he is must be phenomenal.

 

Carla Pinto
Rating:  5/5

 

Gardening in the Dark by Denis Hirson (Jacana) ISBN: 9781770093843

 

A moving personal story told through a collection of evocative poems, Gardening in the Dark is that rare South African memento. Nostalgic without being sentimental, historical without being political. It’s the story of one man and his family growing up in South Africa during the turbulent ‘60s.
David Hirson, author of White Scars and I Remember King Kong, creates images of loss, hope, violence and renewal in spare, but powerful imagery, drawing inspiration from poets as diverse as Neruda, Apollinaire, Goethe and Yehuda Amichai.
This collection was originally published in French so it’s no surprise that Hirson has made a home for his own family in Paris. But his memories of South African have remained with him like a scar. Each line is cut through with personal memory to deliver a sharp, emotional catharsis.
For lovers of poetry and South Africa, this slim volume offers some insight in what it means to leave your home country and find new roots in another world.

 

Anthony Ehlers
3/5

 

Close by Martina Cole (headline)

 

Despised by her mother and step-father, Lily Diamond’s early life is filled with misery - until she catches the eye of Patrick Brodie.
Brodie is a cunning, violent and wealthy gangster who is the product of an equally strife-torn past. By the time he marries Lil, he is already a legend on the streets of Soho.
The pair set out to provide their children with everything they missed out on. They live comfortably, until the dangerous tide of the criminal underworld turns against Patrick. Lil is left destitute and has to raise their five children on her own. Her new life requires her to draw on her considerable strength of character and forces the Brodie family to stick together. Unfortunately, Lil discovers your true enemy is often closer than you think…
Martina Cole is a master of the crime genre. Her characters are tough, violent, and believable. Her portrayal (spanning 40 years) of the grizzly world of organised crime in London is both thrilling and captivating. The plot is filled with heart-wrenching twists and turns and keeps you on edge throughout the book. If you can overlook the overuse of words such as “skulduggery” (particularly in the first 30 pages), Close provides a compelling, if slightly over-written, read.

 

Mandy van Staden
3/5

 

Tell No Lies by Julie Compton  (Pan Books) ISBN 978-0-330-45285-4

 

Jack Hilliard, loved by juries, is intelligent, good looking and successful as an Assistant District Attorney for St Louis. However, his life changes dramatically when his boss, Earl Scanlon, announces his resignation as District Attorney. Jack dances afterwards with his intoxicated friend, Jennifer Dobson, in the parking garage. 
Jack’s decision to run for the office of DA with Jenny as his campaign manager, and his growing obsession with her places a strain on his marriage to Claire. In his struggle for the top position he compromises his values and becomes entangled in a web of lies and deceit. When Jenny is charged with murder Jack risks his job, career and marriage to provide her with an alibi.
This is a suspense novel with an intriguing twist in the tail.
 
Maryna Fraser
Rating:   3.5/5

 

Random Acts of Heroic Love by Danny Scheinmann (Random House) R183 ISBN: 978-0-385-61262-3

 

1992. South America. Leo Deacon is injured. His girlfriend Eleni is dead. He returns to England where he is unable live a normal life without her.
1917. Russia. Against the backdrop of WW1 Moritz Daniecki escapes from a Siberian POW camp and travels seven thousand kilometers across a continent. His only goal is to reach home and his sweetheart Lotte. Will she wait for him? Can love transcend death?
Two stories, with no apparent connection, except for an obsessive love. Leo undertakes a journey through the philosophy of quantum physics and the mating habits of wildlife as he tries to understand the nature of love. Moritz’ experiences become part of a legacy that reaches beyond him. There is a saga-like quality to this somewhat drawn out novel. Keep reading for the pieces of the puzzle to fall into place.  Interesting story, some good descriptions and I liked the analogies.

 

Helen Schlebusch
2.5/5

 

The Bone Garden by Tess Gerritsen (Bantam Press) R 195.00 ISBN: 9780593057780

 

Julie Hamill, still reeling from her unexpected divorce six months ago, purchases a dilapidated old house, much to her sister’s displeasure. While digging in the garden, she discovers human remains. Medical examiner Maura Isles determines the bones date back to the 1830s.
Gerritsen – doctor, anthropology student and bestselling medical author – makes it impossible to put the book down, as she takes us back and forth from the present to the 1830s.
In The Bone Garden, she masterfully unravels the mystery of the bones in an intriguing tale of murder, deception and, ultimately, true love.
If you like a story that keeps you guessing and delivers an unexpected twist, then this is a must-read. Chilling stuff.
 
Nichola Kilian
Rating: 4/5

 

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More reviews

 

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6. Interviews

 

Robert Calderisi gives his 17 Answers to our 17 Questions

 

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7. The Star Struck Writer

 
Aries: 22 March –23 April
 
March
 
23   Sir Thomas Chapais
25   Flannery O'Connor
26   Robert Frost
       Tennessee Williams 
27   Michael Bruce  
28   Maxim Gorki
30   Paul Verlaine
        Tom Sharpe
31   John Fowles
 
  Darrel Bristow-Bovey, 6 April
 
 
April
 
1   Milan Kundera
2   Hans Christian Andersen
     Émile Zola 
3   Washington Irving
4   Maya Angelou  
5   Arthur Hailey
6.  Darrel Bristow-Bovey 
7   William Wordsworth
8   Barbara Kingsolver
9   Charles Baudelaire
10 Paul Theroux
     Joseph Pulitzer
12 Scott Trurow
13 Samuel Beckett
15 Henry James
     Jeffrey Archer
16 Kingsley Amis 
17 Isak Dinesen
20 Sebastian Faulks
      Adolf Hitler
      John van de Ruit 
21 Charlotte Brontë 
22 Henry Fielding
23 William Shakespeare
 
 
  John van de Ruit, 20 April

Ruler:  Mars  Key Phrase: “I am”
 
Aries is a Cardinal Fire Sign and it is the first sign of the Zodiac.
 
The authors born under this sun sign are bold, courageous, original and curious. They would enjoy being passengers on the Starship Enterprize, 50 year into the future, or on the Orient Express 50 years in the past.
They love new projects, new ideas, new holiday destinations.
 
Writers born under this sign are egotistical and often believe that their work is the only worthwhile work.
They are intense, passionate and impulsive.
 
John van de Ruit has changed the face of publishing in South Africa with Spud and Spud: The Madness Continues. The two novels continue to head the bestseller list on fiction lists around the country. Spud has been published in the UK.
 
Darrel Bristow-Bovey epitomises this intensity and focus. His writing is the best opinion piece writing that South Africa has ever seen. And he is impulsive. He has also written a children's book; SuperZero, which won the Sanlam Award, 3 best-selling non-fiction books and numerous screenplays and scripts.
 
They can also be arrogant (Jeffrey Archer) and full of a self-importance that they will never see or begin to understand what the ordinary person wants out of a book (Kingsley Amis and Maya Angelou)
 
Their works are often concentrated around individuals and their impact on society, rather than the world as a whole. Barbara Kingsolver's Poisonwood Bible is a good example of this. They are action oriented and the featured playwrights are here (Tennessee Williams & Samuel Beckett) is not surprising.
 
Aries have a wonderful playful side and they are normally not afraid to take chances. It's not surprising that Hans Christian Andersen was born under this sign and has become an iconic figure in children's literature.
 
They are also adventurous and fearless - a lot like the heros in Arthur Hailey's blockbuster novels. Aries are great at starting things and even better at not seeing things through. However, those who do manage to complete their books produce great works of fiction.
 
Amanda Patterson ©
 

 

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8. The Write Co Competitions for Subscribers

 

Monthly ‘What’s on your mind?’ Competition

 

Write 400 words and win!

 

Prize: 2 Books from The Write Co and Publication on our web site, in our newsletter and in Off the Cuff.

Conditions: 1 Entry per Person, 400 words.

Closing date: 25th of every month

To enter: Send entries to info@thewriteco.co.za

Winner: Angela Auld for Practice!

 

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Monthly Poetry Competition

 

April’s theme is: The Eyes that don't cry

 

Prize: A case of Leopard's Leap Wines

 

Conditions:

 

1. Only 1 poem per month per subscriber is allowed.

2. The poem must not be longer than 30 lines.

3. The poem must be about the given topic. 

4. If you are not a subscriber please pay an entrance fee of R50, 00 per entry.

 

Closing date: 29 April 2008

 

To enter: Send entries to amanda@thewriteco.co.za

 

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The winner for The Sound of Paper 

Pulp Delight by Kevin Lee

My Dad, he owns the pulpmill
Where he welcome trees with greed
And crushes them to paper
So that you and I can read
 
We’re hiking, where the summer rains
Have really left their mark
Lush and cool and misty-wet
The forest floor is dark
 
Above the trees, an angry sky
Huge clouds, maneuvering
Then Crash! And Crack! A bolt of light!
It’s very frightening...
 
We shelter in our dry safe cave
My father makes us tea
And later as the rain subsides
He gently cuddles me
 
The forest seems to come alive!
The Creep and Crawl brigade
Is teeming in its millions,
The lemming urge obeyed
 
Then on we run, as high above
The pine trees shake off water
We laugh and hide, but can’t escape
Their mocking vengeful slaughter
 
The breeze picks up, the forest groans
And Dad winks at me, knowing-
“Did you hear son - that wondrous noise? …
The sound of paper growing!”
 

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2nd Place: Jackie Kelly

3rd Place: Barry Finegan 

 

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Please choose your winner for February: Lights out & March: Gentlemen & Players and send the poets name in the subject line to amanda@thewriteco.co.za

 

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Rick Thinks?

 

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9. Classified

 

  

 
Are you looking for something GOOD to read? 
Let Penguin Books keep you up-to-date with news on the latest releases, exclusive invites and information on upcoming author tours. 

 

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Tarot Course

 

From 19th April for ten weeks, every Wednesday night from 18.30 – 20.30 at The South African National Museum of Military History, 22 Erlswold Way, Saxonwold.

Learn to trace your own personal journey on the Tarot Cards.
Astrology and Numerology on the cards.
The use and meaning of archetypes in our lives.
Learn to read the cards for others.

Phone Sandi on 083 531 4449 or email sandimak@mweb.co.za

 

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Need custom made bookshelves / shelves? 

 

  

 

Contact Rod 083 750-6854 or mail colleenrw@telkomsa.net

 

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10. Students Writing

 

From Friday Mornings with Amanda - The Poetry Sessions Click

 

  

 

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